Hi All,
I have my verse on friend (could be girl/boy) started and need help to complete it with at least a line contribution from each of you. I hope to see this verse actually getting longer as much as possible.
Note1: I shall update this verse whenever I get a fresh line from anybody.
Note2: Please try to put it in as 'Rhyming and Rhythmic' as possible.
When I finally feel that this verse could not be anymore longer, I shall pass this to one of the Hyderabad's local newspaper. And who knows it might get published and I might start getting more such work requests from them.
Lets hope for the best and start scribbling.
My first few lines would be:
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Jab tu nahi - toh teri yaad aayi..
Yaad aise aayi!
- Aankhon mein nami aur dil mein khushi chaayi
Yaad aise aayi!
- Gham ke andheron mein jaise muskuraahat ki ek kiran lehraayi
Yaad aise aayi!
- Sheeshe mein ab bhi nazar aaye teri hi parchaayi
Yaad aise aayi!
- Dil ki harr ek dhadkan mein buss tu hai samaayi (from Abhishek)
Yaad aise aayi!
- (post a good line and see that first here and next could be in newspaper)
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Jab tu nahi - toh teri yaad aayi..
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Please let me know if you have any suggetion/idea to make it a more COOL stuff.
Thank you!
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2 comments:
dil ki har dhadkan se bas tera naam diya sunai
dil ki dhadkano mei bas tu hai samai....
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